Built on Tears
A Journey of Love, Strength, and the Silent Bonds of the Heart

We build our soulmates slow and true,
With quiet hands and hearts that knew
That love is born from ache and grace,
Layered deep in each embrace.
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The first bricks laid with trembling care,
In laughter soft and moments rare.
Through whispered nights and silent pleas,
We learn to love on bended knees.
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Each tear that falls leaves something strong,
Fills empty halls, where we belong.
Through crying eyes and quiet pain,
We craft the walls that will remain.
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Love isn’t flawless, nor is it clean—
It’s pieced from all the heart has seen,
From scars that teach us to believe,
And broken places where we cleave.
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So here we stand, both whole and bruised,
Two souls by trials and tears fused.
In every tear, we come to know,
A love built slow will never let go.
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Comments (4)
Very raw.
This is one very beautiful piece of writing. It could be part of a wedding service. Great work.
I am not a huge fan of poetry (working on it) but I do love yours!
This poem is a reflection on the strength that emerges from vulnerability and the often-hidden emotions that shape our journeys. Each tear shed is a testament to resilience and the human experience. I hope this piece resonates with you, inspiring both empathy and introspection. Your thoughts and feedback are always appreciated. Warm regards, Jason