I wish I was brown sugar
Sweet foundation
Of every baked good
Worth eating
Soft, pliable
Sparkling grains
Catching the light
Ephemeral particles
Forged into something new
And delicious
Melting on the tongue
Rich molasses, caramel savoured
Perfume is nose’s dessert
Poetic redolence
Whenever enfolded
In an embrace
A select few
Pull back a fraction
They inhale
Nose pressed to
My delectable neck
Drawing down
From ear to clavicle
The most
Pleasurable sensation
On the planet
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Lass. What are you trying to do to my poor heart. Seriously, lassie. "They inhale Nose pressed to My delectable neck Drawing down From ear to clavicle The most Pleasurable sensation On the planet" Just. My world. That image drew me in. As of course it did, lol. Then your words. Damn straight, lassie. Fuck. And here comes some links for you to look at. This is my revenge. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/cradling-entropy%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/this-would-be-viral%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/lost-and-hazy-in-lust%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/kitchen-fun-time%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/moist-jq2j0ki5%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/we-come-one%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/dirty-dancefloor%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E https://shopping-feedback.today/filthy/under-your-skin%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Homework for you. Sorry there are so many. But, I had to bring the filthy. lol. I felt justified. I will be leaving my cenotes one on your cenotes one.
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Oh, what an interesting!!!
"Perfume is nose’s dessert" Oh wow, I've certainly never thought of it that way. So brilliant!
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