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dirty dancefloor

yeah...Content warning maybe? Poem...definitely!

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
dirty dancefloor
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dirty dancefloor

sticky bar and more

horny chancers

flirty dancers

drunken confessions

paramedic processions

The deafening bass

love and romance displaced

a pill, a knife

the end of a life

the somber and sobering

Hangover and remembering

the truth despite the pain

that you will do it again

after the haze ascends

the future holds more weekends

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: Okay...so this came about because of remembering a line from Arctic Monkey's I Bet You Look Good on the Dancefloor and just when you're young and go clubbing. I didn't do it much, but did spend a few nights a week during my college years, getting drunk at pubs and clubs. Anyway...I am sure there are warnings in this piece. Definitely not condoning that behaviour...or something.

Can you tell I sometimes am not sure how to fill the Author's Notes?

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    Definitely had some nights in the club, although few. No knives, but a whole lot of these other shenanigans going on. Fun to reminisce through this piece!

  • And now we have Mr. Hyde taking over Dr. Jekyll.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Sometimes I feel nostalgic for youth...sometimes I feel relieved not to need to revisit it.

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