
Should we have stayed? could we have fought?
Or is this land condemned, foredoomed?
So broken, can we be restored?
*
Scattered away, apart, abroad,
We question, doubt; there is no good...
Should we have stayed? could we have fought?
*
Once you've lost hope, what else you've got?
What if—relive—brings no relief—we could?—
So broken, can we be restored?
*
Once, 'twas a thought, now just a spot,
A speckle at the edge of mind, it loomed:
Should we have stayed? could we have fought?
*
And there's no answer. Our cohort
Is strong but weak, for we all share this open wound.
So broken, can we be restored?
*
It brings no comfort; words contort.
So hungry with these thoughts for food:
Should we have stayed? could we have fought?
So broken, can we be restored?


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I have never been able to get to grips with this form. This is smashing 👏