I use to see you as Prince Charming
Now you are just a shattered dream
You made many promises
Actions speak louder than words
You say you love me
Let’s say goodbye
Whoops, you lied
Broken
Us
Meghan Trainor official Whoops YouTube video
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Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Nailed it!!!♥♥♥
So good, best of luck in the challenge!
Love this Mariann... Everytime I read something new from you I noticed growth and depth in your writing style.
Nice work 👍🏻 But check your syllables in "Actions speak louder than words"...
Excellent Nonet… accurate depiction of a Breakup! Really liked: ‘Actions speak louder than words You say you love me Let’s say goodbye”🤩
I enjoyed this. Great work.
Congratulations on your Vocal honours today!
So sad. You really brought that feeling into play. Loved it.
Great poem and sassy video.
*Sigh* Ive known so many that appeared to be prince charming, then turned our to be dirt. Great poem!
Nice work! Thank you Mariann❤️
As Dharrsheena said - you nailed it
😁👍I wondered if this was a song reference with Whoops and it was! Great work Mariann! I need to think of something and get my brain in gear. I hope you are having a good day..I think it’s almost morning there.
I dislike people who lie or make empty promises. Loved your take on the challenge! You nailed it!
"Now you are just a shattered dream." Oof! I liked that line 👍. Nice work 😄
I love the sass! Go Girlie Go!!
So much emotion conveyed in few words.
I love the song and your poem.
You have officially joined the unofficial club of making heartbreak read like "Wow!" Why didn't we ALL write poems when we broke up? Might've worked better than therapy 😁 All the best for the challenge, Mariann!
Nicely done!
Well done.
Strong woman vibes shining through; loved this.
actions speak louder than words love the insights
Excellent take on the challenge