Brain Fog
A few days off meds
My eyes float around the pharmacy indiscriminately
There is motion both real and perceived
I wonder if I should have been driving
I am here, but I forget my purpose every 30 seconds
Suddenly very aware of my optic nerves, like rubber bands stretched
The devil's banjo strings
He plays a stupid endless song
I hand the cashier my stuff
This notebook, bottle of water
and I ask for my prescription refill
I never buy bottled water
But desperate times call for...
She hands me the pills and I scurry off to my car to take one
I wonder how long it will take to feel normal
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I lingered on "very aware of my optic nerves, like rubber bands stretched"
Ohh… this was awesome! Really got me into the character’s mind! Great job!
I love this kind of work, the poem is beautiful. thxx
This is so real. I felt every bit of it. Nicely done, Leslie. Congrats on the Top Story. Very well deserved!
Ugh!! 😩 I felt this one ❤️
I love the stream of consciousness, lovely poem.
Congratulations on having your story featured as a top story on Vocal! This is a remarkable achievement, and it's clear why your work has received such recognition. Your storytelling is truly exceptional. The narrative was not only compelling but also beautifully crafted, holding my attention from start to finish. The way you developed the characters and plot was masterful, making the story both engaging and thought-provoking. Your unique voice and perspective shine through, setting your work apart. It’s evident that you poured a lot of passion and effort into this piece, and it has certainly paid off. I look forward to reading more of your incredible stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic work! Best regards, Dr. Jay
I feel this Leslie vicariously through my kid and again in this flowing release of reality in verse. I am grateful for scientific minds that have brought so many the help they need as best they can. Great piece!
it will take forever...if you are talking of female hormones, LOL. Nice job, loved it!
This really is a very clear portrayal of what it can feel like when you are having mental breakdowns and need relief. Great work here!
The stream-of-consciousness style invokes a sense of disorientation and introspection, the final line leaves the reader with a lingering question, inviting contemplation, we‘re deeply moved by the poem, loved it, and hope to read more of your work, thank you very much again for sharing this spiritual journey that touched our hearts, subscribed.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I loved reading this it felt real especially got hit with the bottled water part.
Oh my I felt this and related far too much to it. I am lapse at times with my meds...which means stinky-horrible-anti-social-nasty makes an appearance. Well written and well done on Top Story, Leslie! I hope you're feeling a bit better since writing and publishing this!
oh, I am sorry. My daughter struggles with staying awake. Her anti depression effects.
Relatable and awesome poem!!!💕❤️❤️
I can relate. I felt the same way at a time when I was put on medication for my mental health. My heart is really deeply with you.
Oh I hate this for you.
Very deep! Kinda fitting for the age I have reached. 😂😂😂. #funnynotfunny.
Feeling this way truly sucks. Hope you feel better now. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
I hope you're feeling better now. I like how you described what you were feeling. I felt like I could feel that myself.