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Bottle Rocket
Poor Little Firework
By Dana CrandellPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Tina Floersch on Unsplash
I reach my apex
shooting fire out of my butt
then my head explodes
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Have a heart! Save the fireworks! (I'm not well.)
About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (12)
This one made me snort-laugh!😂
Oh!! An unexpected narrator/ POV!! Very clever Dana!!
Haha!! 🤣 this is downright hilarious! Thanks for the laugh, Dana! Sometimes I wish there were different genre categories for these challenges! I love the funny clever ones and it would be cool to see them get some spotlight
Laugh out loud funny, Dana. I wish I had thought of Gerard’s comment!
Like who hasn’t, right?
lovely piece of writing👌
You're not well? Hope you get well soon. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️ Also, hahahahahaha, loved your Haiku!
Wow - I just don't know what to say about that.
uhhhhh. bahahahaha
now there's a visual
Hahahahahaha!!!! This is too good!!!!! 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 This is perfect! I love that you and Cathy are bringing some humor into this challenge! Grateful for the laughs to start my day! 🤣🙌🏽
Absolutely love this! Pauline 🌸