The line fades between
heaven and infinity,
where seabirds count souls.
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
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Comments (31)
That's a beauty Cathy! Is that a personal photo? So appropriate!
Absolutely Beautiful.
You are the Haiku master, Cathy! Beautiful!
“Where seabirds count souls”- don’t know why, but this is such a pleasing line Cathy. I like how broad this feels😊
Wow. Love the feeling this haiku creates. Such marvelous work 🩵
Whoa! This was flawless & amazing!
Oh wow, this one is amazing! Gave me chills! Beautiful, my friend! ✨🩷
A very evocative Sky-ku Cathy: From the title ‘Blurred lines’ to the last line ‘where seabirds count souls.’ Pauline 🌸
well done
I love the mystery of that last line. Excellent haiku Cathy! 😊 👍
Lovely words!
B e a u t I f u l
Just when we think you’ve wowed us. You blow us away with another
Ooh, I like this one, playing with horizons, literal and life and death
So beautifully done!✅
What a pretty haiku! Well done!
Simply stunning! I love this, Cathy!
Beautiful ❤️
Exquisite! Such a beautiful and mysterious moment you've created, my friend ❤️
Gorgeous
Cathy, this was heart stilling.... I absolutely adore this!!
Captivating!!!❤️❤️💕
Gorgeous
This. Is. Sublime. bar set high with this one buddy TS and beyond! well done!
I NEVER do "outstanding, compelling" for a haiku. Until now 😁