
this love is locked
for the next hundred years or so
there is no entry here
so please stay away from me
lay your tanned body on the beach
where you should always be
with binoculars
strictly for the birds
bitches, beaches, breaches
of the order of ordeals
broken marriage vows
and those secret places of your trysts
far from prying eyes where you have learned
your first acts
of omitting the life
that has been chosen for you
but you didn’t want to let go easily
seeking invisible, invincible incentives
superimposed on yourself
what for?
if everything you could ever dream of
was right under your nose
you didn’t have to look far
but you decided otherwise
extending the adventure
and breaking some patterns
and hearts on the way
to feel something else
instead of these restrictive measures
of your marital failure
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Thank you for reading!
About the Creator
Moon Desert
UK-based
BA in Cultural Studies
Crime Fiction: Love
Poetry: Friend
Psychology: Salvation
Where the wild roses grow full of words...
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Heartbreaking and hearted!💕
Wonderful work. I praise you for condemning abandoning a marriage. Not many people hold that view.