
You destroyed us at the time of creation
Entering the stage
With the wrong tools –
Malleable gestures
Of mistrust
Checking the phone and all that
Plain double bullshit
What were you thinking at that moment?
You tried to justify your actions
Suspecting the writer
Of being a fraud
Same as your wife?
So, you had to counterbalance that
With me
During this dangerous dance
Over the precipice
On the spans of the blue bridge
As if our relationship was foreordained
From the very beginning
Failing and falling
From the frailest fumble
Of your flimsy fingers
Not holding us at all
Only throwing stones
From glass houses
Into the metal railing
Of our infertile feeling
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June 2022
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Thank you for reading!
About the Creator
Moon Desert
UK-based
BA in Cultural Studies
Crime Fiction: Love
Poetry: Friend
Psychology: Salvation
Where the wild roses grow full of words...
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I love the alliteration. Awesome work