Blossoming Back to Life
...from illness to spring's embrace
There is sunshine on my rose,
Waking me up from slumber
Having my first coffee after a week,
My senses start to reshuffle and
I feel I am slowly coming back to life,
From the depths of
…my self-forgiveness.
A week of sickness passed by.
My breathing had to suffer.
With a stuffy nose, hauled up in bed,
Time stopped, like in a warped zone,
A type of frozen mind clutter.
Fever and chills, headaches and nausea,
It was unlyrical, nothing short of cyclical.
I am alive; it’s all that matters.
I feel inspired by my rose.
I feel lucky and complete.
Yet like a babe, newborn again,
In a world where neighbors
drill their walls at 8 am.
What keeps me going? You might ask.
My family, and our love for nature.
The sunshine calls me out, and
whispered melodies swirl in my head.
A rhythm so divine,
I am amazed at how clear and blue the sky is!
I slowly start making plans,
To get outside in the fresh spring air,
To live again, to be alive, to love,
To dance, to smell the flowers and the air!
Welcome spring; I am alive again!
Inspired by my rose and sunshine,
I yearn to share my words and dreams.
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* I originally published this poem here.*
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Gabriela is passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic, and travel addict. You could buy me a coffee or a tea and sign up for my newsletter here.
About the Creator
Gabriela Trofin-Tatár
Passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/
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Comments (16)
Write more actively Gabriela. You can being some of your articles from Medium too.
Congrats on the Top Story. 🎉 🎉
Fabulous poem ✍️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
❤️❤️❤️ beautifully written! Enjoyed reading
May everything be well, and may you always write inspired works.
Congrats on Top Story! 🎉, Well deserved and super proud!!!
Beautiful poem!
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Wow! This was wonderfully done, Gabriela! Congrats on your deservedly so top story!! 💌🌟💓🥳🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉
The neighbors….even in a house instead of a shared building. Nice poem!! Congrats on TS.
Your poetry is amazing. Congratulation for your top story ❤️
I feel the sun and coffee in your lines, well done!
Well written, congrats
Awesome first line!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️ Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Wonderful words of recovery 💗
So hopeful~ Thanks for sharing your positivity through this poem 💕