
Black kite proud and free
You metaphor Black on Black
Storms that rage in me
About the Creator
Antoni De'Leon
Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).
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This is indeed powerful, with much depth and does well to embrace the human condition.
This is a gorgeous poem that is very powerful.
This is so powerful in its brevity. The imagery of the black kite is striking, symbolizing both freedom and the inner storms we carry. The phrase ‘Black on Black’ feels layered, evoking identity, struggle, and resilience. I love how the poem conveys so much emotion and depth in just a few lines. Beautifully done. it really stayed with me
Brilliantly-penned!
This comes from a powerful place. Penned with excellence. Thank you for writing and sharing!
This is gorgeous inside and out.
A lot below the surface on this one
This was so profound and powerful! Loved it so much!
I totally get the depth of this one. obstacles to being the total self. Love the haiku.
Excellent imagery in this poem
Wonderful and visual
Wow so powerful.
This seems really deep, and that pic is great.