I wanted to title this something different, but worried that my chosen title might cause problems entering the United States in the future so this is the new title. It's the greatest title. No one has ever written a title better than this. (All titles unrelated to content).
Let me be honest. I am finding this difficult. Now, I like a challenge, a stretch, a bit of an obstacle course. “Write about the decline of the British Empire in the form of a narrative poem in which your protagonist is an artichoke” I read, and flex my fingers. “Write a haiku to evoke the sensation of sibilance using only the first half of the alphabet.” “Well”, I think to myself, “this should be fun.” But “write about a system that isn’t working”? A system that isn’t working? Now? In 2026? ONE system? My favourite system that isn’t working? The sexiest system that isn’t working? The one giving me the most angst day to day? The one giving me the most existential dread? I am, as I say, finding this difficult. I will own that I have contemplated writing a thousand words on why the steady “all on” setting on my fairy lights is the EIGHTH of seven options which must be sequentially activated to get there, because that is a system that some fool came up with and it definitely doesn’t work, and now who is paying the price, eh? But how can I write about my fairy lights when…. When…. When….
Comments (15)
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Your poetry sent me floating in a peaceful moment. Thank you. :)
I like your last line. :)
Really beautiful poem, has a good flow to it
Beautiful!!!💕
This Haiku is so relatable and beautiful💙 Love the image you chose too. Many days I feel like her
Oh wow. Exceptional!
Beautiful!
That is a breath stealer. 👍
good job.
Outstanding!!!
So gorgeous, lovely imagery. Left love :)
That's powerful. Well done
Wow, you painted such a vivid picture with so few words. Well done!
Very nice. I like it.