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Below Ocean Sheen

Sink, sink, down further

By Meagan DionPublished 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Below Ocean Sheen
Photo by Alice Alinari on Unsplash

Light can barely reach

Distant, hidden, cobalt world

Bubbles, silence, peace

sad poetry

About the Creator

Meagan Dion

Hi, my name is Meagan. I am a mom to four kiddos whom I homeschool. I am also a glassblower, creator, and writer. I aspire to finish and publish my memoir, but it's going to take a lot of time and coffee. Coffee is a verb, do you coffee?

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  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    πŸ’š

  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    Your poetry sent me floating in a peaceful moment. Thank you. :)

  • I like your last line. :)

  • Really beautiful poem, has a good flow to it

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Beautiful!!!πŸ’•

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    This Haiku is so relatable and beautifulπŸ’™ Love the image you chose too. Many days I feel like her

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Oh wow. Exceptional!

  • Mhairi Campbell 3 years ago

    Beautiful!

  • Caroline Jane3 years ago

    That is a breath stealer. πŸ‘

  • Joe Patterson3 years ago

    good job.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Outstanding!!!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    So gorgeous, lovely imagery. Left love :)

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    That's powerful. Well done

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Wow, you painted such a vivid picture with so few words. Well done!

  • Deanna Fratus3 years ago

    Very nice. I like it.

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