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Becoming Human

a vision of hope

By Randy BakerPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Becoming Human
Photo by Eduardo Flores on Unsplash

When there’s nothing left to lose,

nothing left to prove,

when I finally lay

empty, bare,

crumpled, broken,

Free.

When I have become truly human.

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About the Creator

Randy Baker

Poet, author, essayist.

My Vocal "Top Stories":

* The Breakers Motel * 7 * Holding On * Til Death Do Us Part * The Fisherman

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  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Is this an inverse one?

  • Heather Zieffle 2 years ago

    Really lovely!

  • Anna 2 years ago

    It's so heartbroken! I hope you're okay!

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