
Waves rolling in
Frothy white
Bringing scuttling, digging sand fleas
Receding, taking sand and shells
Crabs scuttle to and fro
As sandpipers eagerly chase
Seagulls swoop to nab tossed bits of food
As pelicans dive for dinner
Small siblings, boy and girl, build sand castle
Bucket and plastic shovel tools of the trade
Scooping a moat crossed by drawbridge
As parents observe, praising architectural skill
Couples walk along the water’s edge, hand in hand
Swimmers play, splash, dive
Rising and falling with each incoming breaker
A frisbee flashes past
Chased by a happily romping dog
As two young athletes toss a football
Laughing as a volleyball player dives to the sand
A surfboard crests a wave, its rider surfacing next
Young woman leans forward as her boyfriend applies lotion
Rubbing it gently into sun warmed shoulders
Spread blankets dotted with towels, coolers, watches, keys
Beach chairs occupied by persons tanning in the rays
A colorful riot of swim suits
A shifting rainbow, undulating to and fro
Bikinis, one pieces, shorts, speedos
Fishermen casting rods
Children running
Elderly ladies in sun hats
Elderly men smiling wistfully at happy grandchildren
Unselfconsciously delighting in nature’s gifts
Wind, water, sun, sand, people, animals
Looking up as sun is momentarily shrouded by a cloud
Sighing, I pick up my book
Departing one fantasy for another
Content that observant lifeguard shall oversee

About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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Comments (17)
Congrats on top story…
Fun imagery and I think we all wanna be at the beach - only 46 days until spring! Yahooooo👏😊
This poem beautifully intertwines the serenity of the beach with profound reflections on life. The vivid imagery and emotional depth transport readers to a place of both peace and introspection. A truly captivating piece!
The imagery of waves rolling in and sandpipers chasing crabs is so vivid and evocative. How did you capture the essence of a day at the beach so beautifully? Your poem truly transports the reader to the shore. Well done!
I miss beach time...
Beautiful nature poem!!!❤️❤️💕
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This is beautiful, sir! so rich in imagery, I felt like I was there! congrats on an awesome Top Story!
A great Top story ♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️
It gives me visions of summer. Great Poem. Well Done!!!!
Beautiful poem. Here's mine. https://shopping-feedback.today/authors/danielle-mosley-rrf0n40ghs%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This is wonderfully descriptive. Congrats on the TS.
Great poem! I love the beach! It’s a peach! Sometimes… leech… I tried. Great poem!
Your imageries were so vivid and evocative! Loved your poem!
Makes me long for the summer 🦋🏆✍️🙏
Such a fun poem!
I miss the beach! Vivid descriptions in your poem, Andrew.