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Senryu

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

I lifted you up

Encouraged you, built you up

Without thought, you left

…..

My soul ripped apart

My essence scattered 0n wind

You the tornado

Senryu

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    Bravo! Well done on the senryus<3 Although the topic is a little sad :(

  • People like this will not be spared by karma. Loved your poem!

  • Very poignant and emotional, Truly lovely!

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