Be and stay with me
Be my—mercury
It's just as far as Venus
It's always been together—us
You're safe as home and Earth
You're my prestige and worth
Your blush is brighter than Mars
You're favourite one of all the stars
Over my heart, you've WON
You're my Jupiter and Saturn
My golden hour and whole fortune
Leave Uranus, be my Neptune
My shining star, my little moon
Come, be, and stay with me—soon
Your Love, Care, and your wisdom
You're my entire Solar System
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Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Lifeless Life
A place where fading memories float A residence where I built my paper boat Rooms where the kid in me was BRIGHT Shouted into the pillow, when scared, would hide The plant that I watered every day The pots that I carved, made with clay Curtains would make a path to the MOON The windows reflected light, 'til it was noon The sky from the yard would tell it's MINE The stars at night would sing me a rhyme The universe was happy, and so was I Why didn't I know life ahead is a LIE?
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I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
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Creativity is at its peak! 🔥 This is sweet and is like breaking the rules; everything in it is marvelous, like the solar system!! 😊👏
This is so sweet and cosmic—it feels like a love letter written across the stars. Such a gentle, dreamy vibe!... I have a request, if you have got time could you please read my only story that I have published. I am struggling to get my first read.
Beautiful poem and I love the photo. The solar system has been intriguing humans for centuries. Well Done!!
This is amazing, I love how you put a whole solar system in poem form, nicely done!
Oh my, you put a whole universe of feelings into this poem. Beautifully written, Maryam <3
Ughhh stop, this is too cute and clever!! You made space feel like home.💖
This was like a breath of fresh air to read. I feel the yearning.
Heyyy, did you just take astronomy class? I know it inspired me to write uni verse... "Leave Uranus, be my Neptune" poetic appropriateness lolol I love this poem a lot 😍 And the pic is really great too 😊 Did you planet that way? 😆 ❤️🧡💛💚☀️🌙
Aww poor Pluto being left out once again. 😭😂 But a sweet poem, Maryam. I always love the themes you come up with, and you always write them so perfectly 😁
This is beautiful, I love the image too!
This poem's celestial imagery is cool. Reminds me of how we use space concepts to describe special people in our lives.
Heyyyy, you can publish again! I'm soooo happy for you! 😍😍😍😍😍😍 Loved your solar system poem! It was out of this world! See what I did there? Hehehehehe