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Be.
Become.
Becoming...
Becoming brave.
Bending, breathing, breaking --
Born breathtaking,
Belonging beyond beauty.
Bona-fide badass --
Be bright,
Boundlessly bestowing blessings.
Be bossy --
Bring bravery, blue blood, brawn --
But beware: brains beat battles.
Born blessed,
Becoming better,
Becoming best.
Be bold.
Believe bravely.
Bloom brilliantly!
Beloved...
Be.
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Comments (23)
So heartwarming and encouraging. ❤️ I think this is one of the few tautograms that makes sense, keeps the words simple, and is easy to read! The form fits your poem like a glove.
This was a top story in my book. I loved the structure; it made me pause briefly to take it all in. Great work!
Holly, this tautogram brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for writing it, and thank you for sharing this gorgeous message. Now, I'll go be and breathe. Thank you 🤗 🥰
So beautiful!!
Woahh nicely done! Just the word "Be" has such a powerful meaning and it resonates so well with the way you've written this
Great mantra with so many great lines! Believe bravely! ❤️
As I read I saw many possible allusions to parts of popular book titles by women. Interested if it was planned or happenstance. Bold and bodacious!
Brilliant!!!
This was so uplifting and inspirational! Very powerful! I loved it so much!
This is beautiful Holly. Anything that comes from sincerity and from the heart is going to be powerful and bold and your tautogram is no exception. I love it. So we'll written and meaningful.
This is really good! Nice job.
Great job!... the best version of who we are...
Ohhh I love this so much. Winner for me
Very lovely words. Becoming has so many possibilities,
Like a Zen mantra...
Beautiful, inspirational. Well done.
Beautifully done - so inspirational!
Well Done 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
Nice one❤️😉
This was a tricky one. Well done.
Love love this poem! It blooms brilliantly!!
Bonafide Brilliance ! 🥰
Brilliant!!! 'Brains beat battles' just so many fantastic lines! This was wonderfully affirming and empowering. Bravo!!