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Bare Feet

For all who need a lift when their feet hurt.

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 4 months ago β€’ Updated 4 months ago β€’ 1 min read

This day. September 10th in 1960, is the day marathon runner Abebe Bikila completedΒ and won the Olympic marathon in Rome--with no shoes.

Each step we take--each footfall tells a tale of struggle and hope. This journey is one of bare feet--one of resilience. And each of us has a pair.Β 

We can do it--with bare feet.

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Bare feet

Tread on vacant lanes

Rough.

Too wide

Asphalt.

Searing.

Bare

feet

Open

Cut

Hardened

Yet hesitant

Poised to run.

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Lines

On Skin

Deepen.

My heartbeat quickens

Then slows.

Spirit wills

Yet wails.

Finish line

Near yet

A blur sketch

Distant.

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Cuts

On skin

Fester.

My mind filled

But blackened

Dark.

Painful steps

Callused.

Trod by unseen souls.

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Line

Crossed.

Victory

Not sweet

But sought.

Fought.

Bare feet.

Cut

But formed.

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A road

Run

As one

Who will come.

The bare feet

Owned by

All.

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For Mikeydred's Song of Seven Challenge

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • L.I.E4 months ago

    Beautiful and powerful poem. Powerful feet Abebe has .

  • Oh wow, Abebe is so dedicated. Saluuuuuute 🫑🫑🫑 Loved your poem!

  • Mother Combs4 months ago

    His story is amazing

  • Krysha Thayer4 months ago

    Such an inspiring story of determination and a well-written tribute to this runner.

  • Lana V Lynx4 months ago

    Wow, I didn't know about this at all! Can't even imagine the pain he went through and admire his determination to win, endurance and will.

  • Sandy Gillman4 months ago

    What an inspiring tribute. The imagery of bare feet carrying both pain and strength is so moving. πŸ‘£

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