Barbie Boy
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He is nothing but plastic,
Dressed in fabrics.
My assumption,
Is that...
“He wishes to
Exist like this,
With a Really Big Heart
And Soft smooth skin”...
He thinks that he is cool
Because of his Swagga.
I acquiesce The Boy has Style, But can he Dance with a Groove?
I was raised to do the Humpty Hump-
Jiggle a little bit of what's in my trunk!
No, I'm not put together...
I come along,
As I go,
Throughout the journey
In my life,
Summing up more
Tools along the trail...
You could have called me
Millions of people,
But why'd you call me
The Barbie Boy?
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (15)
I have to agree with Randy. Take it and wear it like you own it!
I agree with Ruth and Randy! Take it positively! Awesome poem!
Meant as an insult or a compliment? Take it as a compliment & drive them batty! (Not that they aren't already.)
That was fun. 🤣
Oh, Lonzo, your poem/ditty has such rhythm and makes me both laugh and feel sadness. Another wonderful piece of poetry from you 💕🙂
lol...yes!
Ooh boy stop! I love it! Did I sense a plot twist? You should do a part two! 💕
I ABSOLUTELY love this and your rebuttal! So So Flyy! P.S. The Humpty Hump was that dance back in the day! LOL! 😁Fabulous work lil bro!
He called you Barbie Boy because you are pretty, surely? Great piece.
Fun!
Love it
Fantastic!!!❤️❤️💕
Love it 🥰 😍🫶🏽
Omg I loved this This line was so good too 😂 “ I was raised to do the Humpty Hump-” 😂👌
This is so good!