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bad transmission

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By Moon DesertPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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bombarded from all sides

inside, outside, on the line

I stuck my head in there

and it gets sliced through like a lemon peel

the knife only grazes me, not sharp enough

to cut off the entire head as I’m not Elizabethan Queen

now I’m writhing in spasms

like some Black Mamba that constantly

dares to spit malicious venom

who’s going to be under attack?

it’s always me

as if the immune system was attacking its own body

without a shield to protect me from the worst outcome

‘help me! help me!’ I shout

leaving only small sharp shards of pity

when no one wants to be

next to me

as if everyone wanted to put me in a cage

and observe

always inappropriate reaction

to the scrutinised lack of mercy

there is no right response to this

only regret

that they

don’t know much

even with me around

serving them everything on a plate

too bad

they already have one full

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Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    I feel this one deeply, Mescaline, on both sides of the knife & venom. Not knowing how to reach out & help, having a plate that's too full, completely missing those times when someone needs me, mistaking those times when somebody doesn't..., having no one who seems to know how to reach out to me (or at least feeling that way), all the while constantly feeling drained & bombarded. I don't know if this is what you've intended, but thank you for writing this. Whether the way you intended or not, it spoke to me in a profound manner.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Fabulous!!! Loved this inspirational poem!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Very good

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