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Baby, I'm Yours❗

Some Lifestyles come with recurring features...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Baby, I'm Yours❗
Photo by Sandy Millar on Unsplash

I can be good to you

But with a Bad Method...

I can be Good for you

But in a Bad Manner...

I can be Good About you

But with a Distant

Love...

Even though

We're going to disseminate,

Can't you dissemble

Romantic Chemistry,

If only for

The Energy...

I can be good to you

But with a Bad Attitude...

I can be Good for you

But in a Bad Habit...

I can be Good About you

But with a Distant

Love...

Even though

We're going to disseminate,

Can't you dissemble

Romantic Chemistry,

If only for

The Power of The Night...

Can we just be like two love birds,🐦

Sitting in a tree 🍃

Whistling an adoration

Of endlessly...

By Bisakha Datta on Unsplash

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

“ Public Diary, of an Urban Poet

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  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    I'm getting vibes of good/bad, bad/good from Handsome.

  • Doing every bit of nothing together & loving it, good, bad & indifferent.

  • L.I.E3 years ago

    Well written poem! That toxic type of loving. I like the upper case of the words to give is more tension.

  • Kristen Balyeat3 years ago

    Always love your poetry, Lonzo! Such a pleasure to read!

  • Your poetry belongs in the museum! So beautiful!

  • Bren3 years ago

    💖💥👍

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Great illustrations. This poem has a particularly palpable rhythm (all your work does but this one really jumps off of the screen) which makes me wonder if you have some music in your mind to go with it. Just curious and none of my damn business, so long as you keep writing Lonzo! 😁🎇✨🎉💗

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Unconditional love

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