Babel, Revisited?
Another Sky-ku, Inspired by Donna
how high will you climb
as you push my clouds aside
you are not welcome
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Author's Note: This one was inspired by the lovely and talented Donna Fox, with a comment on my previous entry, which could be seen as more of a senryu. With that in mind, I thought I'd create one from the perspective of the sky, itself.
This photo is from the same trip to NYC, taken just before I back headed into Javits Center during a day of work at the Photo Expo. My favorite thing about this one is the juxtaposition of the architecture styles, further emphasized by the reflections of both.
Thanks for reading! Hearts, comments and tips are always appreciated. Also, please check out Donna's stories at the link below. You won't regret it!
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Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (16)
Another gorgeous city shot and a fantastic statement of a haiku to match! Brilliant, Dana!
a great entry, loved your haiku
Bloody good entry! Good luck 👍
What a delightfully clever haiku 🤩✅.
Well done, Dana. And that's why it's a skyscraper!
Brilliant work Dana!!!!
Love how this extended from your earlier one! Another great photo and poem pair!
Oh, I love, "push my clouds aside" so much ❤️ Gorgeous, thoughtful work, Dana!
Oooo, from the POV of the sky, that was so creative! Loved your Haiku!
Great poem!
Another good one, I stopped at two
Oh, this is good and thought provoking!
I read this and wondered if it came from our previous conversation... Thank you for the shout out Dana!! 😁
I just started singing a Rolling Stones tune.
I was at Javits for the NY ComicCon last year. Lovely.
Nice job.