Awkward Senryu #1
Awkward Senryu #1
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Someone is waving.
Sad and lonely, I wave back.
They’re hailing a cab.
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J. Otis Haas
Space Case
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Comments (16)
Oof! Now this, this is awkward! Love it!
Oh no! Sad, bad and embarrassing moment. Congrats on your win
Oooo cringe moment. Really relatable too. 😆 Congratulations!
Fun and relatable! Congrats on your runner up prize! I love how this is filed under sad poetry! 😅😆
So real life!
Oh dear! They missed the opportunity to make a new friend.😉
LOL yep. Been there, done that in NYC! Congratulations!
Congratulations!
Haha. This was great!
Great one! Congrats on your placement in the challenge!
The tone in which I read it made it all the more funny🤣 Congrats on Runner-up!
Hahahahahahhahahahahaha omgggg this had me burst out laughing! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
So good, so funny. 👍😁💯
That second line is too awesome
been there, so many times.
Oof to the second line! Love this, J. 💜