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awkward greeting

a Senryu

By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
awkward greeting
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their warm embrace was

cooled over flames of his wife’s

bitter jealousy

social commentarysad poetry

About the Creator

Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫

“Darkness to me is like water to the sea”

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  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Thankfully, I gave up jealousy after husband number 1 😉

  • ThatWriterWoman2 years ago

    My how icy! Nice work!

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    masterfully written!

  • Not me feeling I can relate so much with this, lol. Jealousy is something I really need to work on. I sometimes even get jealous in friendships. Like I want my friend to be only mine. I wouldn't like it if they got too close with someone else. I do have abandonment issues but I'm working on them. Loved your Senryu!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Nailed it!!! 💕❤️❤️

  • Sid Aaron Hirji2 years ago

    Marriage with jealousy is an awful type of betrayal. Psst last line you wrote an extra l in jealousy

  • ARC2 years ago

    Oof. Definitely fits the challenge. Yeesh.

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    that would be awkward

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