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Cinnamon speckled
Fallen apples missed the pie
Lone deer indulges
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ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)
~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER
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Comments (14)
I love your take on the challenge; congratulations on your win!🍂
This is so perfect and sweet, and "cinnamon speckled" is properly inspired 😁
Congrats on the win, it is a sensory delight, and your picture choice is top notch.
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Love the humor of your haiku. The deer wins in the end!
Looky here! Fabulous haiku and wonderful placement!!! Hugs my friend
I misleafed myself, thinking autumn and leaves and missing that it was apples here which were fallen! Nevertheless, a lucky deer!
I used to live in Vermont and loved watching the deer peck at fallen apples in the orchards. Beautiful haiku.
Aww... This was lovely! ☺️
this poem made me smile... loved the speckled apples that missed the pie
The deer looks satisfied <3 lol
Yay for the deer!
That is a great take on the scenario, deer gets the apple
Ha ha....love the deer, Andrea! A clever autumn Haiku!