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Impatient winter!
Quick to chill the ruddy cheeks
Of lavish autumn
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D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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Comments (8)
Wonderful!! Haven’t felt that yet this far south but some day!
Wonderful haiku and great picture to match! Autumn and winter are my favorites. I just love the cold mornings!
This is lovely. The cheeks and leaves will soon match.
One of the best seasons, always gone too soon. Well done!
Wonderfully vivid anthropomorphic imagery! I really love this one.
So nice, mornings especially are so chilly now. I loved this haiku, I will try to write one now, feeling inspired and listening to an autumn chill playlist on spotify. Have a lovely day!
Impatient and cold, just like me, lol. Loved your Haiku!
I love that image of "ruddy cheeks". Wonderful. Do I need to say it? Deftly....you know the rest.