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Atonement

Inspired From The Movie, By The Same Name

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

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Her name dripped from his lips,

as if it were of his last breath.

Shaking as each letter slipped,

off his tongue, reaching for her ears, to rest.

All he was, she owned it,

held like a tissue in her hands.

Everything he’d ever felt,

circled round, at her command.

A brush of hand was all that lingered,

a memory of a kiss, that once, they shared.

With his hands, her hair, he lightly fingered,

the urge to hold her, more than he could bear.

C e c e l i a…..

He whispered in the darkness,

somehow, he knew she’d hear his call.

The love he felt for her, was endless,

no will to fight the feeling, so he fell.

The morning danced, exuberant, with all its colors,

at last, they'd meet again, no distance known.

They'd blend as one, just like the watercolors,

for past mistakes, forever would atone.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Gosh, your poem was so breathtaking! Awesome work!

  • Really beautifully written! I loved this.

  • Awesome piece 😉📝💯❤️

  • Wonderful movie, beautiful poem.

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