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Goldilocks

Humorous Haiku

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

Home invasion fails

blonde child held for questioning

Was sentence “just right?”

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This is in response to Judey Kalchik's Book Review Haiku challenge:

fact or fiction

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  1. Expert insights and opinions

    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  4. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

  5. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    I don't know. I'm running both hot & cold on this one. Were they too hard on her? Too soft? I just could not say. No, I simply could not say. Lol! Loved it, Kelli.

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    😂😂😂

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    OMG hahahhaha, lovely stuff Kelli!

  • Hahahahhahahaha that was awesomeeee! And I gotta agree with Heather!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Lol!! I love the funny ones :). Fantastic 3rd line!!

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