
Home invasion fails
blonde child held for questioning
Was sentence “just right?”
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This is in response to Judey Kalchik's Book Review Haiku challenge:
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Add your insightsExpert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme

Comments (5)
I don't know. I'm running both hot & cold on this one. Were they too hard on her? Too soft? I just could not say. No, I simply could not say. Lol! Loved it, Kelli.
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OMG hahahhaha, lovely stuff Kelli!
Hahahahhahahaha that was awesomeeee! And I gotta agree with Heather!
Lol!! I love the funny ones :). Fantastic 3rd line!!