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ASLEEP

For the Sensational II Challenge

By Babs IversonPublished about a year ago 1 min read
ASLEEP
Photo by Kinga Howard on Unsplash

I can't see your exquisite body.

I can't touch your soft skin.

I can't smell your essence.

I can't taste your sweet kiss.

But, I can hear your unique voice in my dreams.

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • The Dani Writer11 months ago

    And what a place to hear that voice! It feels like surround sound but it's next level since it's in your entire being. A lovely thought! Yeah, best to put it in a poem 😊

  • Taylor Wardabout a year ago

    Nice way to capture the emotion of longing.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Ohh! Speechless Words can't describe it! ✨

  • Missclickedabout a year ago

    amazing!

  • Henrik Hagelandabout a year ago

    there is something sad yet uplifting in your poem here, longing and dreaming, fine work

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    In dreams, we are free ♥

  • Anweshaabout a year ago

    She stood transfixed, her eyes glued to the screen, as the stunning poem unfolded in a tapestry of essence.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    So beautiful, Babs! Brilliantly done!

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Great poetry!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh, so emotional, this one <3 Wonderful, compellling job, Babs!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    What a wondrous and creative response to the given prompt. Really love your poem.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    I'd offer a hug, if it werent for the Atlantic.

  • Sometimes, dreams are the only thing we have. Loved your poem so much!

  • Lovely thoughts and agree with JBaz

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Love the negatives turned positive in a beautiful way

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh, in the dreams!!! Loved how you finished this!!!

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    And dreams become reality. Well said, Babs.

  • Ali SPabout a year ago

    Simple but evocative! I love it!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Poignant and lovely, Babs. 💕

  • J. R. Loweabout a year ago

    Nice one Babs 👏

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Very nice work Babs! BRAVO!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    That's beautiful work. Well done, my friend.

  • Anna about a year ago

    Painfully sweet, I love it!💗

  • Sid Aaron Hirjiabout a year ago

    Seems bittersweet

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