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Ask Me When...

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By Gerard DiLeoPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Ask Me When...
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Ask me this April

After the Carpathian, until

For no one else delved

On the 17th of '12

.

Ask me in December

If I can remember

Why I joined the Navy — come

1941

.

Ask me in August

Why I felt I must

Visit Hiroshima — arrive

in 1945

.

Ask me in September

Why I lost my temper

Because Heaven and Hell were overrun

By 2001

__________________

For ASK ME IN DECEMBER

Babs' Unofficial Challenge

heartbreak

About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!

Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo

[email protected]

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  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Bloody wars, they ruin everything. Are we any better for them? Lots of dead people. Life goes on to more wars....Time to stop Heaven and hell have had enough. Nice touch to the prompt. Hope you are ok.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    A unique take on the challenge and well-expressed sadness.

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    Insights abound in so few lines. Moving, impactful, thoughtful, heart-tugging. Never forget. Thank you to all who serve.

  • This was so deep and poignant! Loved your poem!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    The wars keep coming.

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    This is unique and touching! 😍

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Poignantly written and heartbreaking!!! Loving it!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    I love your take on Babs challenge, Gerard...there was an undeniable sadness permeating through it all, while still feeling quite off-the-cuff and conversational. Well done!

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