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Ash and Ember

A Journey Through Time, Loss, and the Unyielding Spark of Hope

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read

Beneath a sky of fractured gold,

where time is dust and stories fold,

the wind still hums forgotten names,

etched in the earth like phantom flames.

A river bends where echoes fade,

its waters thick with dreams unmade,

it swallows years in silent sways,

and carves the stone in ghostly phrase.

A tower leans on brittle bone,

its shadow long, its marrow lone,

it whispers low of kings and thieves,

of love once lit in autumn leaves.

The stars once burned with holy fire,

now hang like embers, frail and tired,

a flicker caught in fate’s cold hands,

a spark that dies, yet still withstands.

For though the dark may claim the light,

and silence swallow sound and sight,

each ember holds a breath unspoken—

a vow unbent, a dream unbroken.

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    Exceptional ♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    💙

  • Andrew C McDonald11 months ago

    Wow Jason. You have a true flair for poetic drama. Beautiful work. 🤗

  • Ellie Hoovs11 months ago

    Beautiful! I love the poetic beauty woven expertly within a broken burning world. This is one of my favorite lines "love once lit in autumn leaves" - lovely

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