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As Ember Sweeps

A Poem for the Holiday Challenge

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago 1 min read
As Ember Sweeps
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Prologue

As we approach the season of giving, remember to include one for ourselves too.

This narrative poem involves a generous chimney sweep, Ember. Enjoy!

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Ember graces chimneys on long winter nights

Her short broom whispers, and her cap flies

With each sweep, she leaves love

A warm ember on the grooves above.

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Her footprints trace the chimney walls,

By day unseen, gone when night falls.

Each ember she leaves glows sure and bright

But her hearth stays stark at night.

**********************************************************************One frosty night, as stars did blink

She watched the lights in her hearth shrink

There in the silence, she felt the sting

She, who gave, needed warmth to bring

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With a sweep of her broom and a bright spark,

The sweeper lit a fire in her hearth

Her chimney gleamed with a gentle glow

Black ashes taught what she should know

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To give warm embers is an art

That has to start with a full hearth.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    What a beautifully wrought poem of such genuine and heartfelt meaning, Michelle. I really loved this one so much.

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Oh, I love the rhythm and warmth of this...felt like a hug from Mama

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    This is delightful, Michelle - warm and inviting. Beautiful.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    This is so lovely and warming! 😁

  • Whoaaaa, this was so stunning! Such a beautiful poem!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    I dont do anything at christmas but I appreciate and adore the magical warmth that you evoked with this poem! wonderful, Michelle!

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Magic!

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