Art Beyond Permission—Understanding
For Raymond G. Taylor's Art Inspires: a challenge.

For many years. Years that proceeded my forays into different mediums of art.
oh, to lie
I had suitably, I thought, left to the upper echelons and those who had "deep understandings of the crafts they chose to pursue" to enjoy and consume, let alone create it myself.
lie in peace
I had been under the impression, rightly or wrongly, that art, in all its two-dimensional glory, was somehow not for me.
peace without worry
Opera and classical music, in all their beauty, were designated mysterious mediums, classified as off-limit mediums I could not ever hope to understand unless I took the deepest dive and became an expert.
worry and concerns
This is, of course, ridiculous. There are, of course, those who would rather someone like me not frequent the corridors of an art gallery.
concerns about vile
But they are, by and large, foolish gatekeepers trying their level best to keep the great unwashed from their precious paintings and sculptures.
vile and malicious
I do not fully appreciate the ins and outs of every artist's pressures, strains, joys and loves, nor do I have the slightest interest in diving headfirst into the intricacies of strokes and paint types.
malicious and ill
Who. Cares?
ill will, intent
Surely, the point of paintings, like any form of art, is that they either hold up a mirror to society or move and stir you.
intent is inconsequential
I hate that it took so long to realise that the gatekeepers were wrong.
inconsequential when dreaming
They were wrong to try to dissuade me from enjoying art for what it made me feel, not what they desired I should think about it.
dreaming at peace
Now, when I look at art, I see not just the effort but also the mindset and the passion that the artist poured into their work.
peace of mind
Do I seek out the more significant, deeper meanings?
mind, body, soul
Sometimes yes, sometimes no.
soul is strengthened
But, if I love a piece purely at face value without digging deep, I don't fret or worry about not understanding it on an academic, intellectual or scholastic level.
strengthened in sleep
I can gaze at the wistful, dreamlike painting of a woman at rest, without worry or concern, in her femininity,
sleep so deep
free from the strains of modern life and the advances of men,
deep as valleys
with her feline companion and the bird that happened upon across the open window and also sought refuge from the world we inhabit,
valleys of green
a world that is at times stressful, frightening and dangerous but also beautiful, life-affirming and transformative.
green with blue
The world that lies beyond my window,
blue above, sky
as it does the woman,
sky of stars
in her joyful rest.
stars shining over
I sink back and admire.
over me, us
Admire the brushstrokes.
us peaceful bedfellows
The brushstrokes and mastery of craft on display in such a wonderful piece of art.
bedfellows—humans, animals
animals—my friends
friends don't betray
betray like humans
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: I decided, after much deliberation to stick this in the Poets community, because it had more relevant tags, although it is technically a part-poem, part-fiction, and part-non-fiction take on Raymond G. Taylor's "Art Inspires: a challenge". It was formed from two ideas I had to approach the challenge that worked well together. I have included a link to the main challenge page. So have a go if you have not already! It was formed from two ideas I had to approach the challenge that worked well together.
In the man's own words:
The challenge is to look at a picture (Night Jasmine 2 by Eileen Cooper RA) and write a story, poem or critique about what you can see or feel when you view the image. You don't have to know anything about art to write a story or poem inspired by painting or print. All you need to do is to spend a few minutes looking deep into the picture, to see what interest and emotions it may excite. Even if you don't like the picture your feelings can be distilled into a great story to publish on Vocal.
Here are some other pieces by me you might find interesting:
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (14)
Beautiful and yeah - we shouldn’t have to agree with what the art experts say the art is about; enjoy it for itself - and in this you saw it better and more deeply. Congratulations!!
Congratulations on placing in the contest with this amazing piece, Paul. Well done.
Art, open to interpretation is a world immersed in differences. This one is unique to say the least. Very eye opening a wonder filled/
I enjoyed the poetry woven throughout the prose. It was like two stories that separated and came together over and over. Very cool interpretation :)
This is on a certain level a mystical interpretation of the piece which I very much like. The art work is relatively true to nature, we see a naked woman, a black cat at rest and a fluttering bird, and yet its background is mysterious, gestural and suggestive of other worldly interpretations of the work. I think the poem within your story helped evoke that sense of mystery even as you made that mystical connection with the work in your story’s finale. Really well done, Paul!
This is beautiful. I love the poem within. And your words on art gatekeepers, so true. I just see what I see, even it takes a while to get there. Like, inhale some thoughts on this one, but haven't completely figured out the purpose of the bird.
The poem woven throughout the narrative worked so well! This is such a beautiful piece, Paul! Thought provoking too! Really enjoyed this read and went back for seconds
I've taken my kids to gallaries and theatres and so on since they were knee high to a grass hopper. I believe in respecting the work of artists, but not in making the consumption of art a sanctified preserve.
Your last four lines were my absolute favourite! Humans are the worst of the worst! Loved your take on the challenge, Sir Paul! 🍩🥐
I liked the poem within the paragraphs. This is an interesting way of writing two things at once.
I love the flow and form of this 😁 I just submitted one for the same challenge 😁
PAul I felt you open up in a deffernt way, something perhaps deeper and more personal. this is beauty
Wonderful Paul, really wonderful. You certainly delved into the depths of meaning with this picture and wove a captivating narrative. Particularly on the issue of entitlement. Thanks for supporting the challenge.
Definitely more serious and contemplative than my silly entry. I can relate to your thoughts about art and critics.