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Approaching the Fall

A Haiku

By Amanda StarksPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
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I watch as you drift

languidly at one with the

breeze, content with sleep.

Haikunature poetry

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Amanda Starks

Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!

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  • Stephanie Hoogstad4 months ago

    Aww, the leaves are falling asleep. Such a better thought than thinking about them dying. Feeds into the idea of the seasons being a continuous cycle very well. Well done!

  • Gabriel Huizenga4 months ago

    This is fantastic - a lovely and lilting window into the leaf's journey. Excellent entry, Amanda!!

  • Caitlin Charlton4 months ago

    Wait, so the leaves fell languidly, as if they were falling asleep. Damn, this was good. Far better than good. I could see it in my mind sight. Not only did you make us feel, but you also showed us the relationship between the breeze and the leaves. Outstanding work Amanda🤗❤️

  • Oooo, like drifting into sleep. That was brilliant. Loved your Haiku!

  • Lovely descriptive thoughts and a beautiful image

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