Buried beneath a mine of greed,
wild birds fly through my mind;
in clear sky they shine, purely free
of cold shadows they’ll never find.
**
With golden seas, of days gone by,
now filtered blue to gray;
remember the past, where with a sigh,
I could watch sun-lit mermaids at play.
**
But now, through out dim day and dark night,
my skin burns, willfully unseen;
only scars will show the massive blight
to twisted eyes, of gilded green.
**
Tree lines shattered, species adrift,
due to time unheeded
to correct the course as seen unfit,
for materials unneeded.
**
Buried deep, I’m left alone
to mourn the sights you’ll never see.
About the Creator
KJ Aartila
A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.
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Omg, this is breathtaking, Keila! I loved this so much: "But now, through out dim day and dark night, my skin burns, willfully unseen; only scars will show the massive blight to twisted eyes, of gilded green." 😍😍😍😍
This was so deep and powerful!
Some great words about what we miss