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Anti-pastoral Ballad

What we miss ...

By KJ AartilaPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Anti-pastoral Ballad
Photo by Matt Artz on Unsplash

Buried beneath a mine of greed,

wild birds fly through my mind;

in clear sky they shine, purely free

of cold shadows they’ll never find.

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With golden seas, of days gone by,

now filtered blue to gray;

remember the past, where with a sigh,

I could watch sun-lit mermaids at play.

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But now, through out dim day and dark night,

my skin burns, willfully unseen;

only scars will show the massive blight

to twisted eyes, of gilded green.

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Tree lines shattered, species adrift,

due to time unheeded

to correct the course as seen unfit,

for materials unneeded.

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Buried deep, I’m left alone

to mourn the sights you’ll never see.

nature poetry

About the Creator

KJ Aartila

A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.

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  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Omg, this is breathtaking, Keila! I loved this so much: "But now, through out dim day and dark night, my skin burns, willfully unseen; only scars will show the massive blight to twisted eyes, of gilded green." 😍😍😍😍

  • This was so deep and powerful!

  • Some great words about what we miss

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