You are my loyal subject as my feet are sparkly cleaned,
You always help me up from my chair and you’re hardly ever mean,
You straighten my back until I’m fully erect,
If you ran for president I’d surely elect,
I am an old woman yet it’s our time together that makes me gleam!
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Day 4 of Quitting
If this is how sobriety feels, maybe it’s better to go through life a little buzzed… this, along with other hits like, I want to kill myself, I wish I was dead, and I’m going to throw myself off a bridge have been the only thoughts on rotation these past few days. I promise myself that if, in a month, I still feel like this (‘this’ meaning despondent, full of rage, and simultaneously numb) I can go back to smoking. Until mid-February though? Nicotine is off the table.
By sleepy drafts5 days ago in Longevity
Comments (8)
Super Limerick!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️
This is so sweet; I love the sense of unfading, forever love! 🥹❤️
Amen to that! 'A little respect goes a long way'. Love this limerick!
Beautiful.
I love this one, how sweet this is!! 😁
Oh, this is lovely. My back is getting there :). So , i live in hope. Love this much.
This is sweet, realy nice limerick.
This was so wonderful!