I will always care about you
Even if we never speak again
I will always care about you
You will always be my friend
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I care about your birthday
I think about you every June
I still tell you every year
No reply, I guess it's still too soon.
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I care about your future
I don't judge you for your past
I remember every moment of our friendship
and how we said it would always last
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I care about your feelings
and I worry about your heart
I hope he treats you kindly
and never tries to tear you apart
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I care about you when you're happy
I'm here to listen when you're sad
I'm still here when you're angry
Even if I'm the one who made you mad
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I care about you always
your addiction causes my heart pain
but I will never stop caring for you
even when it's driving me insane
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I know sometimes I care too much
especially when there's nothing I can do
even when you feel I won't understand
Remember, I'm always here for you
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I care about you when you're acting cold
when our friendship feels dead and frozen
You're more important than any sister
You weren't forced on me. You were chosen
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I'll always be here for you to lean on
you can always use my shoulder
we've been best friends since we were kids
That isn't changing now that we're older
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I always cared about you then
and I care about you still
even if you think I don't
Let this remind you that I always will
About the Creator
Sara Wilson
I love Ugly Things.
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I write... whatever I feel.
Sometimes it's happy.. sometimes it isn't. But it's real. And it's me.
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH4 days ago in Critique
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Very well said... I can feel the longing to reconnect with someone you grew up with. Hope she gets a chance to read this. It will definitely spark a positive reaction. Happy belated congrats, Sara!
Congratulations on your beautiful top story.
This really touched me, thank you so much for sharing this, really appreciate made me feel so much here, your ability to be able to put this feeling into your writing is simply and truly a gift. Well done for this also being one of your top stories amazing work.
Gorgeous lines right here: "You're more important than any sister You weren't forced on me. You were chosen" Congratulations on your top story, Sara❣
oh such a kind feeling
This hot me hard. You have that ability to write eloquently but without making it impersonal. Beautiful, Sara. Well done on Top Story!
Oh no. A broken friendship. That's so sad. No replies though. That's harsh... 'You weren't forced on me, you were chosen' Wow. If she does not feel this in the deepest parts of her soul. Like I do. Then... Damn. This is putting me in the feels for sure. You're so very caring and all I can do, is hope that she will finally believe it. See it and appreciate it. The rawness of this is definitely captivating. The flow was great and the voice was tender and deeply moving. Brimming with nostalgia and sisterly love. Outstanding 🤗 ❤️ 🖤 👌🏾 👏🏾
Aww... This is so poignant & beautiful Sara! 🫶🏾
Awwww beautiful. A very important friendship.
This is such a sweet poem. I'm sorry that something has obviously torn you and your friend apart, but I'm glad to see that you still care about her. It makes me hopeful for the friendships that I don't really maintain anymore due to distance.