I fail, and see only the loss of my dreams
Not the drive that allowed me to persue them.
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I am told "You are not good enough to continue"
And I am blind to the success that brought me this far.
***
My vision is filled with those that desire my absence
Blocking out the ones who seek my presence.
***
I experience the struggles and tribulations of life,
So I forget the joys and triumphs that came with them.
***
On the crest of a high wave, one sees the limitless sky.
In a trough between waves, one sees nothing but water.
It's R U OK day, and the answer to that question is not always 'yes'. Sometimes, the best thing you can do to help is to listen without judgement, and show compassion.
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Natasja Rose
I've been writing since I learned how, but those have been lost and will never see daylight (I hope).
I'm an Indie Author, with 30+ books published.
I live in Sydney, Australia
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Very thought provoking and reminder to those who might be in need.
Great words, and I will tell you I am totally OK, whether I am or not
Wow. I read it twice because is hit so hard. This is fabulous. Well done
Fantastic and fabulous poem!!!
Very relatable
Great poem! That's my preferred part: My vision is filled with those that desire my absence Blocking out the ones who seek my presence.
Beautiful poem. In its brevity, it still conveys so much relatable emotion. The last two lines are so poignant.