Already Gone
A HaiKu of Empty Halls and Fogged Glass
By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 9 months ago • Updated 9 months ago • 1 min read
Credit: Abandoned building interior By Darren Hendley #596884796
Breath on the window,
Silent steps in empty halls—
I’m already gone.
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Comments (8)
I still remember your haiku. a top one.
Where are you? I've been searching for you for a long time. Very clever!
Evoke strong feeling in just few words. Remind of the wise saying: " you will know the value of someone until you see her chair empty."
It makes everyone who reads it think about the consequences. Wise Words!
So lovely. Touches the heart and so few words make us think 😭♦️👍👌
So heartfelt and straightforward
Death does not have to be sad. Good job.
So much emotion in so few words. Haunting and heartfelt. 🖤🌫️💭