Almost, At First Sight
Dollar Challenge - Invention Edition (May/June)
By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 7 months ago • 1 min read

Noir Art
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We trip over the urge of feeling alive
like it's something that could be discovered
But desire sees love, with fate's mismatched eyes
till blue puddles distort and discolor
She was more lovely than a flower bouquet
during a phase of mid summer apathy
Though I knew it was best, I could not walk away
her roots were buried deep inside the heart of me
I loved her in a way that is too hard to mention
like a god pouring over his creation
Fine tuning each part with the best of intentions
I loved her to the point of invention
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (5)
Leads up beautifully to that last line! Thank you so much for sharing ♥
Fades to the prompt beautifully at the end.
But did you find the two of you to be in tune with each other?
Oh, this is such a beautiful entry <3
The description of love here is intense. Reminds me of when I felt that way about a project at work. Pouring my all into it, making it the best I could.