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Alice's Snowstorm

Poetry on Releasing Burdens

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
Alice's Snowstorm
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This is for Mikeydred's Feburary prompt.

Some burdens should be buried--before they do.

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Now Feburary's storm was no visitor--

It was a leech,

Wrapping his cold fingers around the hinge

Clogging the path he'd never clear.

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The next day came,

Yet did not leave,

Snowdrifts rose, icy barricades.

The door shut, frozen.

The world shrank into icy regret.

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Alice should have shoveled on the first day.

Should have fought the storm when she could

It now owned her--

Claiming her in its patient grip.

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By March, they discovered her house,

Still upright,

Within only an echo remained.

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Outside, the snow piled--

A cold cover.

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This text is NOT AI-generated or copied from any source. The presence of AI tags is coincidental.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Denise E Lindquist11 months ago

    Very good!❤️

  • Tiffany Gordon11 months ago

    Emotionally deep, hard hitting & very well-written!

  • That feeling of regret sucks so bad. Loved your poem!

  • angela hepworth11 months ago

    Gorgeous! I love the cold, icy exterior you create with your language here.

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    🤍

  • Love this work. Keep it up..

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