Outside, it is deathly still.
The trees are statues frozen in time and the sky is a blanket of heavy, dark clouds.
The atmosphere is dead but very much alive. The atmosphere has invisible energy, full of life but the clouds are deceivingly lifeless.
The wind slowly picks up, gently tossing and turning the leaves, then violently thrashing and twirling, whipping and whirling them in the air.
In the distance, thunder starts to roll behind the clouds like a drum gradually getting louder until suddenly it explodes, like a loaded cannon in the sky. Other times, it cracks like a tree splitting down the middle that shakes the ground as it falls.
The house shudders and shrinks away, waiting for the next attack as the rain transforms from a soft, slow rhythm into a heavy, hammering beat.
Flashes of lightning illuminate the entire sky like flash bulbs from a million cameras capturing the world in a state of rage.
Howling is the wind, roaring is the thunder, pounding is the rain, blinding is the lightning.
Until suddenly everything stops.
It can last a minute, it can last an hour, but it vanishes within seconds.
Just as quickly as it started, the wind dies down, the rain evaporates, the thunder resonates to nothing and the lightning fades. The clouds begin to part from each other and that dark, heavy blanket disappears to reveal a clear blue sky and a warm yellow sun.
The only pieces of evidence of atmospheric anger are the scattered leaves and the moisture left on the ground and on the windows. Without the leaves, without the raindrops left behind, the storm did not exist.
It is hard to believe that something so violent and unrelenting can arise from such an innocent setting and end with something so beautiful like a rainbow.
It is hard to believe that one minute the wind is shrieking violently, the thunder is exploding loudly, the rain is falling angrily, and the lightning is flashing brilliantly and in the next minute there is absolutely nothing.
What starts with such wrath ends with such peace. What starts so ominously ends so reassuringly. What starts with dark ends with light. What starts with gray ends with color.
About the Creator
Alyssa Musso
A scientist by trade, but a creative at heart. One novel in progress with too many other ideas taking up space in my head. Some of those ideas end up here.
Instagram: @alyssa.n.mussowrites
My website! https://www.alyssamusso.com/
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Comments (7)
Oh my, Alyssa, this stunning! I love storms and your visual and dynamic descriptions put me there! love the gradual build of drama and elemental violence that gives way to serene stillness! love this so much! definitely one of my favourites of your poems!
The writing here is so descriptive, it literally takes you to a thunder storm, love how you wrote it as an anecdote to life. Very inspiring!
Beautifully written. Nature is so powerful yet beautiful. Nicely Done!!
Well-wrought! Your use of alliteration throughout underscores the way such events can seem both random and inevitable. The whole piece was brilliant, but this one really made me stop and read it over a couple times: "The wind slowly picks up, gently tossing and turning the leaves, then violently thrashing and twirling, whipping and whirling them in the air."
Beautiful prose poem, Alyssa! Love the beautiful lines with repetition in the final paragraph.
Nice work! The storm’s wild energy and its sudden calm are like a perfect reminder of how chaos can clear up into peace. Love how you captured that shift—it’s like a little nature rollercoaster! ✨
Nature is so beautiful. Love how vivid your poem is. You capture the storm and the aftermath very well. Excellent writing.