
Was it the rumbled cry
that echoed too much the owl
crying "who?" "Who are you?"
into the shadowed, moonless air;
Was it that the steel beams
groaning
wood creaking
beneath the weight
of cargo that must be carried
towards unmapped destinations -
too much to bear.
Perhaps it was because
I flipped the switch at the fork,
headed towards mountains
and rivers that beckoned
with open arms.
You took offence to my boom gates
never one to hold fast
to the ties.
My wheels will not screech
nor spark
I will chug along
without protest
towards a valley
that lies ahead
wide enough
for the whole of me to arrive.
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Comments (4)
Beautiful imagery & uplifting conclusion.
Wonderfully done. The world is big enough. ðð
This was smooth and soulful. Loved the train metaphor, it really hit.
There's something about trains, isn't there? Dirty, diesel spewing things but in the night, a lonely traveller, doggedly heading somewhere, hauntingly signalling their presence. I love how you use that as a metaphor here. Great stuff again, Ellie!