A Sense of Autumn
For the Sensational II challenge
I spy with my little eye a fairy wind in the meadow.
Her song is sweet as she tosses up leaves,
and her fragrant wind is full of memories.
I shiver as her chilled wind flips my hair about,
and my taste buds water at the breezy hint of cinnamon.
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Heather Zieffle
I'm an avid fantasy and sci-fi romance writer who enjoys dabbling in other genres from time to time. I have a few self-published books on Kindle so please check them out!
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Comments (9)
Oh this splendid and the idea of a "fairy wind" and how you brought it to life, is perfect here. Thank you sharing this one! Another great piece by you!
I really love the images you've evoked with your use of words here. Perfection in a sensory poem.
feels great
I love the idea of a "fairy" wind...it came to life. So much fun and every sense was awakened
I found my happy place! I love Autumn, and you have captured its essence brilliantly, Heather! (Now, where is my sweatshirt?!)
Perfectly autumn. Very well done.
Kind of zingy!
Just saw this and think it would also fit in my latest challenge. Lovely words
Lovely poem for autumn, Heather!