A Lone Shot of Whiskey
That lone shot of whiskey will always get you.
I.
Nothing’s lonelier
than a lone shot of whiskey
in the corner of a crowded bar.
II.
It sits there
discarded,
barely touched,
while its owner
stares at the sorry reflection
in the mirror behind the cashier.
III.
The eyes tell the story
of this man’s
unattained hopes,
smashed to pieces.
And it tells the story
of this man’s
dreams, never
allowed to be dreamt.
IV.
He’ll grab it once,
then put it down.
Grab again,
but thoughts inside
forces it down.
Finally, he breaks
and hides behind his folded arms
on the beer soaked, polished wood
surface.
V.
The shot pushed aside.
The whiskey jumping with one last
plead to the would-be drinker.
It sloshes and swirls
then slowly comes to a stop.
It’s lost this bout.
VI.
And now sits alone,
in a corner of crowded pub,
next to the solitary man,
neglected,
forgotten.
About the Creator
Dean Traylor
I wrote for college and local newspapers, magazines and the Internet (30 years). I have degree in journalism, masters in special education (and credentials), and certificate in screenwriting. Also, a special ed. teacher (25 years)



Comments (1)
This was devastating. The sense of hopelessness you've captured in the poem really struck a cord with me.