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A Fight in The Dark

The Fine Line Between Life and Death

By Moon DesertPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2025
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Reframing my mind

a thousand times

in one week.

Reality splits

wherever I go.

There’s art

defying rating,

funny and scary

all at once,

beauty intertwined with a dash

of masterful distinction.

Pleasing to the eye.

Shedding an old skin

like a snake.

Getting used to a new routine

lurking from every corner

of this rock and cave city.

Luring me with its lurid history.

Rebel writers and Robin Hood

scattered around the canal filled with boats.

I must gather materials from divergent source,

scooped up from various places and scorned.

Never acknowledged fully by anyone,

only by the writer collecting scraps

both visual and mental, replacing physical junk.

The writer wants to be known and hailed at last,

but not everyone is ready or waiting for it.

Some will ignore and pass it without a word,

only a few will be thrilled and proud.

The ones who can see humanity

in a human, and not the façade,

as this was only the illusion and in a foul taste

that everyone labelled without looking back.

It’s time to complete this paintbrush strokes

with a grand flourish worth all the greatest

and walk away from all the worst without regret.

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Thank you for reading!

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About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

Where the wild roses grow full of words...

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  • ANITA11 months ago

    nice

  • Gregory Payton11 months ago

    We all hope that we will be remembered, but the truth is unless we have done something famous we will someday be a photo on the wall no one knows. I am leaving something of myself behind to a little girl which will be a surprise and maybe she can do the same. Great photo for the story!!

  • Congrats 🍾🎉🎈🎊 on top story!

  • Simon Aylward11 months ago

    Really love the imagery in your poem Maggie. I can visualise the flaking paint from aged graffiti; 'Shedding an old skin/like a snake.' It's very uplifting at the end too. Love it!

  • We all crave to be seen. Wonderful work

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Wonderfully written and leaving without regrets is inspiring!!!

  • Who among us does not wish to be acknowledged, remembered & celebrated? Yet, those who have something to say of worth can ill afford to bend to such desires but rather content ourselves with rummaging through the detritus seeking what is true whether others recognize it or not. Well done, Maggie. Once again, I had to read it through twice before it could settle in upon my heart & soul.

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    The writer wants to be known and hailed at last, Love that line! Great poem

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