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“A door through the crevice of which the moonshine peeps in”*

A sonnet about sumi-e**

By Alison McBainPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in The Sonnet of Shadows Challenge
“A door through the crevice of which the moonshine peeps in”*
Photo by Tadeusz Zachwieja on Unsplash

Ma is empty space filled with meaning

from Japan’s history. Mountain landscapes

traced in black shadows, gray seas, creams yearning

toward cherry blossoms and sketched through shapes

unfinished. Hundreds of hushed words, a thousand

withheld brushstrokes, stories told in silence,

a lone hourglass paused in shifting its sand

from one life to the next. Japan is dense

and ancient, a rocky island chain lush

with the secrets of millennia. Art

is the greatest mystery of all, flush

with centuries of lust and hate and the start

of something fresh. My inheritance, you see—

I feel Ma, know Ma, hold Ma within me.

* * *

*Quote attributed to Bernhard Karlgren.

**Sumi-e is the Japanese art of ink painting.

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About the Creator

Alison McBain

Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/

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  • Imola Tóth3 months ago

    Congratulations on your runner up placement! 🎉🎉

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    You’ve put a wonderful spotlight on the empty spaces, well done

  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    This...is really sublime. I think that's the only words I can form right now. Well done. Great entry.

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