“A door through the crevice of which the moonshine peeps in”*
A sonnet about sumi-e**
Ma is empty space filled with meaning
from Japan’s history. Mountain landscapes
traced in black shadows, gray seas, creams yearning
toward cherry blossoms and sketched through shapes
unfinished. Hundreds of hushed words, a thousand
withheld brushstrokes, stories told in silence,
a lone hourglass paused in shifting its sand
from one life to the next. Japan is dense
and ancient, a rocky island chain lush
with the secrets of millennia. Art
is the greatest mystery of all, flush
with centuries of lust and hate and the start
of something fresh. My inheritance, you see—
I feel Ma, know Ma, hold Ma within me.
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*Quote attributed to Bernhard Karlgren.
**Sumi-e is the Japanese art of ink painting.
About the Creator
Alison McBain
Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/
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You’ve put a wonderful spotlight on the empty spaces, well done
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