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A Descent Into Madness

A Poetic Dance Where Nightmares Dwell and Darkness Reigns

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 2 min read

When the night falls still and the clock stands mute,

Where shadows crawl in dark pursuit,

A scream erupts—a sound unreal,

A nightmare born with death’s appeal.

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Her body twists like broken bone,

Her face, no longer her own.

The demon grins through shattered teeth,

A child lost in hell beneath.

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Her voice a rasp of hellfire’s breath,

A mockery of life and death.

"Come closer now, Father dear,

I’ve waited long for you to hear."

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The priest, he falters, faith undone,

His heart grows cold, the terror spun.

The room swells thick with rancid air,

As ancient eyes begin to stare.

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Her neck snaps back—a crack, a tear,

A silent scream, a whispered prayer.

Her skin peels back, her blood runs cold,

A sight too dark for eyes to hold.

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"Do you feel it? Can you see?"

The voice echoes, wild, and free.

"You thought you’d save her? Foolish man,

Her soul’s been mine since time began."

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The walls stretch thin with twisted cries,

The dead reach out from unseen skies.

Their fingers claw, their breath is near,

Each whisper burns, each word severe.

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The priest cries out, but no one hears,

His prayers are drowned in ancient fears.

The demon rises, eyes aglow,

With power no man should ever know.

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The air turns thick with molten screams,

Reality cracks, breaks at the seams.

The walls drip blood, the ground grows wet—

A horror none could e'er forget.

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The lights go black, the night turns foul,

And something stirs with a guttural howl.

Her bones snap back, her face distorts,

She grins with joy, her voice retorts:

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"You can’t escape; you never could,

I’m not from where the living stood.

Your God is weak, your prayers are dead,

Your faith is mine, your soul’s been fed."

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The priest recoils, his heart in shock,

As time itself begins to lock.

His mind breaks free, his sanity torn,

A nightmare from which no one’s reborn.

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The room implodes, the walls give way,

All sense of life begins to sway.

He feels his spirit ripped in two,

As shadows rise, as nightmares brew.

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The demon laughs, its hunger keen,

It feasts on every shattered scream.

"You think you fight? You think you win?

I live inside, beneath your skin."

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His breath escapes, his vision fades,

As darkness wraps in endless shades.

The house is still, the silence deep—

A grave where living things don’t sleep.

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But deep below, in walls of black,

A voice begins to call him back.

It whispers softly, just a breath—

"You thought you'd conquered life and death?"

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And in that house, where shadows grow,

Where demons wait and horrors flow,

The night will never see the dawn,

For evil here has never gone.

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So close your eyes, and rest your head,

But know that you are never dead.

In every breath, in every scream,

The demon waits within your dream.

PantoumOde

About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    What a great epic horror poem. I am probably wrong but this kind of reminded me of one of Edgar Allen Poe's poems and I think you know which one. Nevermore, nevermore.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Excellent, hooked to the last line!

  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒about a year ago

    This is the stuff nightmares are made of. Great work!

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