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A Commentary On Love

Written: Tuesday 29 October 2019 @12:06pm

By Casey SilverRosePublished 6 years ago 1 min read

Lovely you are Leaping from Leaves.

So Far Fetched in Fairness

Time Seems to STand STill

When I Gaze into your Gorgeous Georgia eyes.

Butterfly Blue and Bursting

With Winding Wisdom

Intrinsically, Irresistibly and Irrationally

Drawn into the Depths hiDDen inSiDe your Soul.

You are Yearning with Yellow

Passion so Possessive Positive and

Full of Hope, Happiness, and Harmony.

An Awestruck Audience

Cuts Chords through Caution

Entrinsically Excited to Express

Kindness Kindled by Kneeling.

Maybe Meeting at Midnight

Only Ostracized the Omnipresent.

Quickly the Quetzal and Quokka

Variety Vanish into Vapor.

Never Noticed Nor

Juxtapositive, instead Jugulating Justice.

Unusually Unique and Untouched

Maybe Zappy Zabernism belongs in Zoos.

For ONE simply cannot expect

That TWO people can fall in a

Love THREE times the size

Of FOUR tiered definitions found in textbooks.

And FIVE elders alone cannot

Judge SIX-hundred members of a congregation

For SEVENteen-year-olds simply are not capable

Of EIGHT thousand-year-old standards.

That say LOVE is a choice

And LOVE is an action

For LOVE is one's destiny

So don’t you dare contradict destiny

By tainting the definition of LOVE.

But THEY don’t understand

That THIS feeling won’t go away

And THIS feeling started when

GREEN met BLUE and CLASHED.

They CLASHED over RED

And then BLUE became PURPLE

And GREEN became Intrinsically drawn,

Irresistibly so, to this new

BLUE turned PURPLE

And now ONE question remains…

How does BLUE feel?

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About the Creator

Casey SilverRose

I’ve been writing stories and performing slam poetry for about six years now. Writing is my escape, so I build worlds and explore them in order to evade the intrusive thoughts that living in such a harsh, dark world inevitably creates.

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